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Given that you granted me leave to love,
What shall you do?
Shall I your delight, or emotion move,
As I start to woo;
Shall you distress, or scorn, or cherish me too?
All trivial grace can scorn, and I
In spite of your dislike
Without your leave can perceive, and perish;
Bestow a loftier Fate!
It's simple to destroy, you can fashion.
Thus give me consent to adore, & adore me too
Lacking design
To elevate, as Love's cursed insurgents behave
When whining Poets moan,
Fame to their beauty, from their tearful eyne.
Sadness is a puddle and reflects not distinct
Thy charm's beams;
Delights are untainted streames, your gaze seem
Sullen in sadder songs,
In cheerfull verses they radiate brilliant with praise.
That will not allude to express you lovely
Wounds, blazes, and shafts,
Storms in your brow, nets in your locks,
Corrupting all your parts,
Or else to betray, or torment ensnared hearts.
I’ll make your vision like sunrise orbs appear,
As mild, and fayr;
Your countenance as crystal smooth, and pure,
Whereas your dishevelled locks
Will flow like a serene Area of the Ayr.
Wealthy The natural world's treasury (which is the Bard's Wealth)
I will use, to dress
Thy charms, if your Mine of Delight
With matching appreciation
You but open, so we mutually bless.
The composition examines the interplay of passion and acclaim, where the speaker speaks to a maiden who requests his devotion. Rather, he proposes a shared exchange of poetic praise for private favors. The wording is elegant, combining courtly conventions with direct statements of yearning.
Within the verses, the writer dismisses usual themes of unrequited passion, like grief and tears, arguing they dim true grace. The speaker favors joy and praise to highlight the woman's qualities, promising to render her gaze as bright orbs and her tresses as streaming breeze. The approach highlights a practical yet skillful perspective on bonds.
Rich The natural world's hoard (which is the Writer's Riches)
I’l use, to adorn
Your graces, if your Source of Delight
Through equal gratitude
You but unlock, so we mutually grace.
The section captures the essential deal, in which the author vows to employ his artistic abilities to praise the lady, in exchange for her willingness. The wording mixes devout hints with earthly desires, providing depth to the work's theme.
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